Super Smash Brothers Brawl, Smashball

[MrListen]

Here it is, hope you guys like it.

[AquateenJ]

That looks pretty good. No complaints.

[MrListen]

That looks pretty good. No complaints.

thanks

[Yoder]

Good work, though the bright yellow is a bit harsh on the eyes (and not very true to the game).

[Spy]

enough smashballs jesus christ

looks good though

[MrListen]

Good work, though the bright yellow is a bit harsh on the eyes (and not very true to the game).

Well, the yellow is meant to be like that, but what exactly makes it "not true to the game"?

[Radioactive Blueberry]

Looking good but one thing, I animated it to see the flow (easier to see wrongs, it wouldn't save so I couldn't post it here..) and the lines between yellow-red / red-purple makes it look very odd

[Ragnarök]

Blank Space. remove it.

[EdpR]

yes, i agree with Ragnarok, there's a lot of empty space, get rid of it...

[Perigi]

Awsome

[AEM]

i can't see it T_T

[$uper To@d]

Good Work!b

[Yoder]

Good work, though the bright yellow is a bit harsh on the eyes (and not very true to the game).

Well, the yellow is meant to be like that, but what exactly makes it "not true to the game"?

The smash ball never glows such a bright yellow color in its hue cycle.

[MrListen]

Ok, so if I'm reading this right, you guys want me to get rid of as mush empty space as possible, make the yellow less bright, and have the yellow to red to purple blend together more. Is there anything else I can do to improve it?

P.S.
Thanks for help.

[Ngamer01]

Yeah, get rid of the black outline and use a colored one (use a Smash Ball reference image if need be).