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(08-29-2010, 12:22 PM)Solink Wrote:
(08-29-2010, 11:40 AM)Gors Wrote: the body should curve with the head. Also the hat's right (our) part should curve a lil' more
better?
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Ness speaks for himself there.
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Great. Much better. I think it would look awesome with MXX's head.
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His face looks flat when it goes down. I don't mean like "cartoony flat" I mean like flat as a pancake.
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I see it. And the ears need to change too.
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With how much his head goes down it seems to me like his hat should go a little further to.
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I don't like the body; it looks like it's shrinking instead of curving.
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Why does his whole chest have to shift? Does your chest shrink if you nod your head?
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Try to have the body/sleves fold more, not just clip down
oh and the button on his hat is missing.
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The neck/shoulders do.
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Try nodding your head infront of a mirror.
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Transition frames are required.

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I looked at the animation from SSB and he don't move his body exepted his legs
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His chin should maybe come down in front of his chest? I dunno it looks like he's tucking his chin into his shirt.
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Much Better

PK intro part 1. Any Good?
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