[sprite comic] [excess blood] Castlevania: Time Distortion

[Oddball]

This is working MUCH better than before.
The text was a little hard to see in this one, but it was because of it being on top of a white part of the background, not because of the opacity persay. The scripting is much nicer now, though I think Alucard was still a little too blatant about what he thinks.

Coming along much nicer. Though I'm still a little confused as to whether this is a comedy or a serious comic. Seems that with the topic, it should be more serious, but Soma is making it a little more comedic than expected.
Keep up the good work.

[Soldjermon]

This is working MUCH better than before.
The text was a little hard to see in this one, but it was because of it being on top of a white part of the background, not because of the opacity persay. The scripting is much nicer now, though I think Alucard was still a little too blatant about what he thinks.

yes, I've tried to make page 5 much more easier to read, but the background is lighter than I want it to be, which makes the text a little hard to see. I could've chosen black, but that won't work as well though.

Coming along much nicer. Though I'm still a little confused as to whether this is a comedy or a serious comic. Seems that with the topic, it should be more serious, but Soma is making it a little more comedic than expected.
Keep up the good work.

yes, I thought it would be better to be a little more serious comic, but I decided that isn't the way to go, so I'm going to go back and try to fix the first 4 pages, with the help of SuperNormalMan. because the script and speech dialog needs to be reworked on, as well as fixing the dialog boxes and the mugshots again.
I wouldn't know of when I'll start reworking on them, but I hope it'll be really soon.

- Soldjermon

[Soldjermon]

another double-post! same thing happened to the last double-post, which means new comic page.

here's page 6! X3

before you criticize me, and to let you all know, Soma had dropped his digital wristwatch this time in this comic page. Soma seems to lose his stuff.. huh? XD

enjoy!

- Soldjermon

[Soldjermon]

another update, page 7 is released.

one thing to let you know, that big hammer that Soma has, he never had it, but I had no choice but to use that, since that the actual weapons from Dawn of Sorrow hasn't been ripped yet. the hammer is actually from Order of Ecclesia. o.o;

enjoy!

- Soldjermon

[Soldjermon]

I'm guessing that this is getting a little old, but just to let you know, that page 8, page 9, page 10 and page 11 are completed.

yeah, I've been on a roll, of making the sprite comics, but I've been really excited to make these. o.o

- Soldjermon

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

They're cool, but I don't like the smileys you added in... I thought the characters were emotive enough.

[Soldjermon]

They're cool, but I don't like the smileys you added in... I thought the characters were emotive enough.

oh.. I'm sorry.. x-x just tried to make the mugshots fit the emotions that are happening in the sprite comic. I guess that isn't a good idea..

- Soldjermon