BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP

[Cshad]

I feel like making my pokemon team in GSC style, so I started with Gallade. C+C so far ? The legs are really bugging me, but I can't make them longer because I need to keep the 56x56 limit. Should I just make the legs longer and say screw it to the limit?

[Devicho]

Aww I was planning to make my team in this style you jerk. >:<
And to keep in in style, maybe make it look like he's jumping with his legs bent or something? Color choices seem a little weird to me, too, like you could probably hunt down a better palette.

[Rökkan]

and what about making the opposite?
make the body smaller to fit in bigger legs?

[Cshad]

I appreciate the comments Devicho and Rokkan, I'll be sure to use that when I remake Gallade, because he looks fucking awful.



I mean Jesus, this turned out wonderful (imo), compared to Gallade, he sucks >:

Second member of my team, Gallade will be remade as well. C+C?

[JarJar]

good because gallade is completely off and horrible, he doesnt even have blue on him or light green.

2nd one is alright, but it's stomach sticks out a bit too much on the lower left, push it in a lil by a pixel, the long black line under its arm(the front of the tummy) halfway at that line push the lower body 1 pixel to the right.

lastly the lil spikes on its wing, bring the second two under the first up by a pixel or 2, those things dont extend that low. hope this helps, im an asshole when it comes to critting pokemon sprites, but they work wonders, good sprite though.

[Wavey]

I'm so jealous, at least Cshad hurr can sprite Pokemon. :c

I'm waiting for newGallade because Rokkan and Devicho gave good crits on it, I can't really search for more f

[Cshad]

2nd one is alright, but it's stomach sticks out a bit too much on the lower left, push it in a lil by a pixel, the long black line under its arm(the front of the tummy) halfway at that line push the lower body 1 pixel to the right.

This is the only thing I don't understand, I think I have fixed everything else though.
@Wavey: You should get one msn, we have not talked in forever.

[JarJar]

im saying to push in the stomach by 1 pixel, also theres a red pixel on the wing at the bottom that doesnt need to be there.

[Cshad]

?

[JarJar]

hope its okay i edit, this is what i meant: http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/3434/latiass.gif
stomach needed to be rounded more, and that dot on the wing needed to be gone.

[Cshad]

Oh no, that's fine, it looks better. Here, I think I finally got it right;

[JarJar]

just get rid of the black dot on the wing and its done

[Cshad]

Ah, ok.



New Swampert wip. Is anything wrong so far? A few things are bugging me, I think its the face, and the fact that I lack an orange shade, which makes Swampert, Swampert. I'll fish for an orange shade and see how it will turn out, but in the mean time C+C please?

[Boo]

Not so much light reflecting on his face?

[Cshad]

Better?



I need to add the other hand still.