Assist Trophies and Pokemon

[Tarvonas]

Oh, hahaha, I didn't notice the description on the front page! Ahh, they're basically exactly the same. I suppose I should've looked more thoroughly through the list. xS

Glad you guys like it! Though Aura, where abouts do you think I should touch it up? I can't quite put my finger on what needs help, but I'd really appreciate it if you told me.

[Locked Achievement]

The mud section seems seperated from the floor, and the shading makes it look slightly flat, rather than circular. Other than that, I dont know what else could be fixed!

[Tarvonas]

Alrighty, I'll get right on it! Thanks, mate!

EDIT:

Here we go:



I lowered the dirt a pixel, making sure not to get rid of the bump completely, seeing as the dirt was pushed out from the ground. I also noticed that Whacka in Paper Mario has a rather thick inner outline, so I gave mine a little but more too, in the form of a lighter shade; to give the impression that it's less fat, and more rounded.

Is this any better? Anything else that needs changing?

EDIT AGAIN:

Forgot to mention, I moved the eye over a pixel.

[Locked Achievement]

I would recommend that you dont shade in the bottom of the mud, because that wil make it look attatched to the floor.

[Tarvonas]

I tried it without the bottom outline, but it looked a little odd.. The dirt is kind of piling up, so it makes sense to have some sort of shading at the bottom, I guess.

However, I did try lightening the bottom shade, and darkening the lighter shade. Seemed to work quite well, I guess (number four). In number 3, I merely darkened the lines separating each ball of dirt, as well as make some minor changes to the whacka's actual body, as with the fourth.

[Locked Achievement]

I like 3 best

[Kitsu]

It looks pillow-shaded. Please define a light source.

Otherwise, it looks okay.

[Tarvonas]

I thought because it was from Paper Mario, and that there generally is no shade on the characters in that game, I should shade it in a similar style. My reference pic strongly suggested that, too.

But I'll try it with a more definite light source, if you wish.

[Locked Achievement]

The game isnt paper mario, though.

[Tarvonas]

That's very true, and it just so happens I made a quick little edit earlier to add shading accordingly because of this fact.



Any better?

[Locked Achievement]

Not trying to sound awkward, but the colours are almost too similar. The shading itself is good, but the range of colours that you used aren't very well defined

[Neslug]

Not only that, but the colours look dirty; try a slightly more vibrant and colourful blue.

[Tarvonas]

Sure thing, I'll try it in a sec then. Stand by for an update in a little bit.



Okidokee. I made it as vibrant as I assumed possible without making it painful for the eyes. How's that? Any better?

[Kitsu]

New colors look nice, but see if you can up the contrast between the shades a bit.

[Tarvonas]

I wasn't sure how to increase the contrast between the shades without really changing the actual colors, so I did end up morphing them a little, as well as increase the width of the second darkest shade.



Is that what you were after?