M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens)

[Baegal]

inspired by ridge's vivian because I liked it so much. I might do Beldam later. C+C Please~

[Tero]

Looks pretty good.

[Sengir]

Belly shading is too angular, but the rest is pretty awesome.

[Boo]

Wow, looks pretty good, nice job. Can't wait to see Beldam if you decide to do her.

[Baegal]

thanks, I'll try to do Beldam in my spare time, she seems harder.

[Azure-Tranquility]

Something about the shading bugs me...

But the lineart is alright.

[Baegal]

I fixed Marylin up a bit, but im still not sure whether she should have the cheeks or not. Beldam was hard, i need c+c on her.

[Baegal]

i changed beldam a little more, because i saw a few errors.



c+c por favor~

[Azure-Tranquility]

I say yes to adding the cheeks.

[Baegal]

i thought so

do you see a problem with beldam?

[Mallacxo]

It looks like she has two big eyes, but I know this is her hair, but it just looks like it.

[Shouty]

Nose needs to be pointier. Make the width of the entire sprite an odd number of pixels. Right now, it's just kind of flat and square.

[Baegal]

Better?

[Shouty]

Yes, much better. Now for the hat: the brim is pillow-shaded. The brim of the hat sort of curves out from the point. That curviness needs to be suggested more in the front, and in the back, it should just recede out. Give it depth.

[Baegal]

not 100% sure what you meant, but I think this is better