My Karts

[zwb147]

Is it good to go?

[Stooben]

I'd say so.

[zwb147]

I don't know if the shine makes it look better or worse.

[Stooben]

The shine is definitely a nice feature, but it hasn't been done quite right. I think the shading around it needs to be more textured, like the pipe from SMW. Right now, it looks like the light source is above just is directly hitting the center of the kart. Try to make it look like the light source is coming from the same direction as it is with the rest of the karts. But remember to make it still look cylindrical. (Sorry if I didn't explain this right. I'm mainly just trying to say, make the shading more like the SMW pipe.)

Also, the beam in the center of the kart has no shading.

[zwb147]

Oops, I was so worried about the pipes that I forgot to do that. I'll fix it.

EDIT:

Hopefully I fixed it.

[Rhyme]

mm, One issue i have with it tho. It's inconsistent with the other karts.. The lightsource.. on the other karts you did so far it's on our left, but for the pipe one it's on the right.

[zwb147]

It looks right, but then again I don't really know.

[Baegal]

If the sun is at the right, make the shine at the right. The shading is messy, they can also be straight lined, just like the SMW pipe.

The colors also need more contrast and less colors.

Study it, its good for SMK style. Also, the wheels need to be bigger, and the pipe's rim should be wider than the actual pipe. The bottom of the pipe could also be more angular, and more cone-like. Also, the bean looks somewhat pillowed.

whew, that was a mouthful.

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hope this helps

[Stooben]

The light source is still coming from the wrong direction. Look here:

[zwb147]

Oh ok the SMW Tutorial confused me.

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I fixed the lighting problem.

[Stooben]

That's better. Now try making the wheels a bit bigger like Baegal suggested. The pipe rims look okay to me, though. Oh, and the kart is still missing the seat backing.

[zwb147]

Are you talking about the pink and white thing in the artwork or the seat inside the larger pipe?

[Stooben]

The pink and white thing.

[zwb147]

Ok, is this good?

[Stooben]

I think that's about right.