Mabelma's sprites

[Mabelma]

Yeah Bro thanks to all of you guys.
Anyways Here's something I made for Andrio's game.

It's a Blurp by the way.
I can't believe I'm getting good at this.

[Mabelma]

Hey guys here's I made a collection of different kinds of fishes from Mario so Andrio could use them:
I hope you like them.
I'll post them in Andrio's topic later.

[Gors]

lineart's too blocky, lacks contrast and shading. Try finding something similar to them to base off your shading and hues.

[Mabelma]

NO there's no problem with the cause that's the actual style.
It has to lack shading, blocky outline and contrast.

[Gors]

...poor style you've got there, huh?

[Mabelma]

Yeah but it's not mine it's Andrio's.
Join the 1 Month, nothing to do spriting project
I'll make some more things for my game later.
So guys could you suggest some enemies for the game?

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Sorry for the double post again.
But I went and made 3 more tiles for my ground so tell me what you think.
Here are the tiles:






A screenie of what it looks like united:

Can you guys see a grid?

I'm going to do next some water tiles.

Here I finished the hill tile(1 going up):


Here it is united with the grass tile I made earlier:


I like it but I may change it.

Completed the hill tiles and some other tiles that I needed to use to make the hill work.
Scrennie First:


Hill tiles:

[Goemar]

Well I be damned, I tip my hat to you Mabelma.

[Kosheh]

itt mabelma is the king of tiles.


which i must say that tileset of yours looks quite dapper

[Mabelma]

Wait is that sarcasm Goemar and Kosheh?

If not then I will change my title from Member to king of tiles.

[Bear Saxaphone]

Hey guys here's I made a collection of different kinds of fishes from Mario so Andrio could use them:
I hope you like them.
I'll post them in Andrio's topic later.

Way to blocky, and thats not part of the style.

[Mabelma]

Yeah I know I'm not really good in that style.
Gorsal and Kosheh are you serious?
I actually like how the tilesets are coming out.
Any suggestion, Comments and critics are well appreciated.

[JosephSeraph]

You. Improved. A lot.

The only thing i can say (because your style is very different from mine) is to remove the outline of that... thing...´s nose....

the one above the fishes...

[Goemar]

I wouldn't go as far so to say "The king of tiles" but you've got a lot better. In tiles anyway.

[Mabelma]

Thanks Goemar.
Anyways Joseph which one are you talking about?
I'm going to make some more sprites today.
Some more tiles and maybe some more enemies.
Hey guys I made the water tile.
Here is the tile alone:

Here is the completed water tiles united:


The black bg is so you can see it better but it's going to look like the bg.
One more thing done!
Hey guys here I finished the first part of lvl 1 but I don't really like how the water turned out.
So any suggestions or edits to the ground are well appreciated.

I think I'm missing the transition between the water and the ground/grass.

[Goemar]

That water needs work, looks like funky space dust.