Crappy (PLAYER)

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

sorry for the double post so soon! i wanted to mention i was inspired by chris's suggestion, and i've made some changes and additions to my move list, which can once again be found in the first post.

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0PvKxKltsGB

concept for crappy's theme, done in famitracker
it'll probably sound very familiar to anyone who's followed my musical pursuits for the past couple of years

[Sevenstitch]

Its still no buttfish

it will have to do i suppose


Really like this track, that pickup around 1:20 is killer

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

duck punch - claw toss
-crappy throws one of gatsby's claws, which returns to him like a boomerang

inspired by my friend kev's character, gatsby the crab, and his main method of attack:



will update the first post with new sheet when i'm less lazy

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Maybe you could make it flash with you the lighter blue instead? I don't know if you've tried that.

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

i'll try that tomorrow. i just spent all night working on this:




i used this image of jotaro as a reference.

criticism heavily welcomed. it's been a long time since i've done anything on this scale.

[Kosheh]

i'll try that tomorrow. i just spent all night working on this:




i used this image of jotaro as a reference.

criticism heavily welcomed. it's been a long time since i've done anything on this scale.

I like how he's one of the handsome JoJo's as opposed to the creepy huge ones.


I can't really think of anything besides it being kinda off-centered (and that's an easy enough fix)
Also it seems kind of small in comparison to the other character portraits but that's just me. You'll want to just cross-check that with Chris (it's probably fine?)

[Virt]

As I said on Tumblr, I think the portrait could use some more shading on the upper lip, and/or the pink shade you used for the lower lip

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I think Will A. Zeppeli would be a perfect reference for your character!
First guy from the left.

Edit:

Hope it helps!

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

sorry, but i really disagree. tellis also suggested zeppeli. is it because he has a mustache? i picked jotaro because he's stoic, slender, and he has thick eyebrows and a hat with a visor on it. i appreciate your edit, but it doesn't help that much because i have no intent of using zeppeli as a base. i did see some stuff i could take from it, though.

I can't really think of anything besides it being kinda off-centered (and that's an easy enough fix)
Also it seems kind of small in comparison to the other character portraits but that's just me. You'll want to just cross-check that with Chris (it's probably fine?)

i made it off-center because i was mainly looking at gors' original portraits and chris' for reference:


the size of the face is maybe around the size of chris' face, too. i especially used vipershark's portrait for shading reference.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

That's a shame. I thought of Zeppeli because of the moustache, but also because he is a Hamon user, which I found tied in neatly with your water-based attacks. He's also pretty nimblet and sometimes wacky - which doesn't stop him from being tough and determined.

Anyway, in regards to how the current portrait compares to the others, I think the fact it's a profile portrait breaks the consistency. I also checked out CBL without a moustache and realised the proportions weren't right. So here's the edit and the Jotaro reference:

I'd go for a size closer to Viper's face and centering, it'll allow your portrait to be more visible in the character selection screen.

I hope it helps more!

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

thanks! i honestly thought going for the profile view would be more interesting. is it okay if i take your drastic edit and make some changes and use it?

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

you can always keep both versions, one being an alternate portrait! and yeah sure you can

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

i might do that! i'll try to touch up my original portrait later to be more in line with this one.



for now, i think i'm done. (unless anyone else has any critique, of course)

EDIT: just had an hour-long critique session with chris, and i think i'm REALLY done now. i'm very happy with this portrait!

[Baegal]

Looks so much better! Love the mullet/hair in the back